1 - 'looking forward' paragraph explaining our views of future development.
2- Rachel suggest including the diagram of the greenbelt. I am adamantly opposed to this as i think suggesting direction runs contrary to the theme of NOT suggesting direction.
3 - title block. I know it seems redundant but i think you want to constantly remind people who you are so they remember who to award the blue ribbon to.
***more boards are coming, but i want them to read sequentially so i'm posting this first.
4- big sentence. we need to figure what this is. please make suggestions.